The child snatcher is based on the character from chitty chitty bang bang i beleive but not quite sure, i remember seeing a clip of him in top 100 scary moments tv program and the story and consept was great it just needed a revamp so i thought of this chilling story.
The child snatcher is a thinly looking man who dresses up in raggy dimmly coloured clothing with a hat and cloak, he drives a sweet van and dances around and draws the kids in to buy sweet from his van only to kidnap them. what comes after that is very disturbing and sick to even imagin. The familys of the missing children grow inpasient with the law not being able to find who is behind this and the family start pointing fingers at the very same person claiming he is some how behind this but there only evidence on this is because they find the guy creepy so the law/officers disagree with arresting him but to quench the angry familys they agree to go talk and investigate the man. The officers turn up at his house and enter but find nothing but a man who seems to have dedicated his life to making sweets and selling them to the kids. The officers satisfied with the investigation tell the family not to push it any further and they will do everything in there power to find the one behind the missing children.
not happy with this, 2 of the fathers deside to go look in the mans house for them self. They wait for him to leave then they break in through the back door and start looking through the house. They see a seller door and open it to see a sight they wish they never and it will be the last thing they ever see when they relise the man has returned and his standing behind them.
with the 2 missing fathers now the rest of the family know something is not right and they go out and force there will on the old mans house entering it but no one seems to be home. The family discover the seller and what is down there. The child snatcher locks the rest of the family inside the house and begins to kill them 1 by 1 until the family manages to break out of the house through the top window but not before seting the house on fire traping the man inside of the burning house. When the house is burned down to ash and the officers investigate the remains they discover the horror's the child snatcher did but they find no trace of the child snatcher.
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